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Lol yeah speeking of my story I made another one if yalls wanna see it.

Yes please! 😊

All right, time for notes! I highly recommend checking out Samuel Michlap (our instructor)'s work, he is incredible and super nice

• Story comes first, not technique.
• Story will define the language of your world, and design will give it form.
• Every world needs to have its own distinct language that sets it apart.
• Style should always be your voice, not the imitation of another's voice.
• Abstract design is a crucial element in taking your story beyond the written word and creating a style that communicates your message, even in the smallest details.
• Abstract design taps into our subliminal emotions; even if we don't conciously understand its purpose, it evokes a feeling. You can use that feeling to add depth to your worlds and their designs.
• Try using lines and shapes to create a rough abstract image that embodies the feeling of your story. Keep refining and detailing that image (making multiple versions) until you find one that speaks to you. This design can be turned into patterns that you incorporate into your world; the more designs you make, the more complex combinations you can create and the deeper your message will be.
• Keep your symbols consistent throughout your story; for example, if red means death in your story, it should always mean death. If you suggest multiple meanings for the same symbol, it will confuse your audience and muddy the overall impression you're trying to make.
• Main takeaway: try to take the words of your story and turn them into a distinct visual language that you can infuse into every element of your world design.

めしあがれ!

“NO!!!!” “Don’t!” “The villainess doesn’t deserve that!” She mummbles and with that, my emotional chains breakes me and I wakes up but this isn’t my body I wakes up in. “What?” And this is the start to a reencarnaton. Carrol a 29 year old cat lover dies infront of her phone screen and is reencarnated as the villeness ‘Tiara’ of her romance game she loved so much. “No way,” I say in disbeleaf “YAHHOOO!!!!!!!!” “Yeah baby! Free from the realm of the dead and into the land of the living!” I jumps up and down on my bed “May I come in Ma’m?” a maid says after knocking. “Gimme a sec!” I say and after a few seconds later “Kay ready!” the door opens and it’s her #1 maid Mia. “Your breakfast is served. And if you will let my words pass you don’t usualy stay in bed for this long.” “Yeah sorry ‘bout that I ended up staying up way more than expected ahahaha…” I say. “Ma’m Its a bad habbit to stay in bed for too long.” “Yeah, yeah I know but the bed is soooo coommfffy… I never wanna get out.” “Ma’m, may I remind you that your ‘Danger Floof’ is refuseing to eat the meat that you didn’t prepare. She may loose her life if you don’t prepare it.” and with that I gets out of bed and get changed, brushes teeth, brushes hair ect. Ect. And feeds my danger floof Necro. Than eat breackfast and goes out the window after finishing my studies (quite literaly) and gets back into bed after a day of smegging off. And she wakes up and goes to the cave of monsters and fights and fights and fights. And before she knows it boom, its midnight. "Wow, " I say looking at the sky "Its beutiful..." I yowls like a cat, calling Necro. And I rides into the night with her floof. -A Few Days later- "Yawwwwnnn" "Morning Necro." 'Yowwll' Necro says in reply. I say "Today is the day." She gets up and actualy fixes her bed. (Something I can't do cos I'm too lazy to care in real life.) Brushe teeth, feeds Necro, eats breaky, sneeks into the cave, beats up all the monsters and gets dressed for school. When I gets there I go to the main hall where the first years (including her) get their levels known. Now Tiara had nothing to do sence the age of 4 so she had done a lot of leveling up. "Tiara Maincoon!" says the head master. "Yes Headmaster." I say in reply, geting onto the stage "Put you're hand on this ball." he said and so I did. The ball regestered her level at LV212?! "Tiara Maincoon... Level two hundred twelve???!!!!" the students mermered like crazy. Was that her real level? Did she mess with the ball to have it regestered at 212? What will happen next? -The First Day Of School- "The first class is swords!" the teacher says waving his hand kinda pointing at the wooden swords stacked up near the training grounds "Once you get your swords, find an opponent to mock battle." the teacher finished and no one wanted to fight poor little Tiara. But then, the 4^th main character Able(think Abby from KPDH but black hair) comes over and says "I'll prove it to everyone here that you are Not LV 212!" "Well I've got nothing else to do so..." I say geting into a 'pulling the katana out of the sheath' sorta pose and all of the students laughed at my pose, including Able. But I calmly said "You can start at any time. Im ready when you are." but his responce was "You mock me. Haaaaaaa!!!"(battle cry sorta thing) he tries to strike me but... I'm LV 212. I'm faster than the speed of light. I go behind him and whops his backside and sends him flying into the tree. And he goes through that. So she makes a soft barier and flings him back to the tree. Everyone had their jaw droped she had beaten a LV 10 person. And made a barier that could hold him up. But instead of crowding around her asking how she did that they were even more cautious around her. Than the next class is magic. And I end up breaking something most of the king's strongest mages have a really hard time breaking. "Tiara Maincoon! You have no place in this school! Your expellment is filed." says a self-serving 2nd prince "You have no place in this school if you lie about your level." says the headmaster but the teacher of the class begged for him to reconsider and to not expell me saying "Please! It might be true that she is level two hundred twelve so dont expell her, PLEASE!!" and than she tried to get proof that I'm level 212 saying "that surely wasnt your full strength, right?" so I say "Yeah fine... yawwwnn" "メリト ." I say quietly and under my breath and a huge sakura tree grew and grew and grew untill it was above the clouds. The sakura had pettles EVERYWHERE and it was spread out to around a mile (give or take). It was beutiful. And once more, their jaws droped to the floor. Well, ground but still. And after that, like a day or two later Im called for an audiounce with the king. "Tiara Maincoon!" says a knight. I open the doors, walk up to the stairsteps and do a sort of bow a aristocrat guy would do. "Raise your head." the king orders so I do. "I am sorry for what foolishness my son has done to you." and now hes bowing. "No, no, no, its not your fault anyway, please raise your head." I reply and say "there's no need to bow your head when you've done nothing wrong to me." "Hmmm, very well than, what do you want, i can give you anything in my power. Land, money, gems and jewels, anything" he says. "I'm sorry," I say "I dont want anything. Its more like I havent done anything noteworthy to gain your trust. I'd be doing something closer to stealing from you rather than geting a gift from you." I say. He makes a half smile half disapointed look on his face"Fine than, how, may I ask, did you get so strong?" he says, and I reply with "I went to the woods within the tarretory of my parents and defeated the monsters one by one, than once I killed all of those I went to the cave that was chuck full of mobs with the amulet of growth that gives you dobble the EXP after killing a mob and the monster calling flute and killed the mobs and the boss over and over and over again." I finish, smiling like its an everyday thing witch, it was. I look at the nobles around the room and some of the women actualy fainted... there was silence. The king called over his strongest knight Cain who was lv 60 and he came up and started coming at me with a sword so I went with a bow. Calm and colected, I dodged it. The knight said "No knight would've done that. I beleve she is lv 212." a guy in the crowd even said "Wow.".

RaiX13 (04月15日, 6:56)
It reminds me of an anime I saw once.

'​Villainess level 99: I may be the hidden boss but I'm not the demon lord' perhaps?

RaiX13 (04月15日, 9:36)
That's the one!

​I have never met someone who knew that anime!! There's so many like it but Yumiella takes the cake as the protag