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Good for you! Also I've got another story!
The second story for the week is A Romance! I've been doing everything BUT romance for a while now and the reason behind this is well, I don't like too much romance. But today is an aception. Here is the story.; Once opon a time there was a teenage 17 year old princess living a normal loners life. Her name is Ruby Sajaheart, she has long beutiful red hair and sparkly amethyst like eyes (Anyways), but one day she was forced to get engaged to some dukes son who was a compleat and utter slob who treats her like a slave. And she doesn't like that. A few weeks later she needed to get back to school but that same dukes son was acting weird. He wasn't a slob, he was an arrogant, what also serprised her was that he was in the student council ( in which her twin brother was in charge of) he didn't seem the same. Her immediate answer was he was the 'dress to impress' type. Ok I need a break cos I can't spend all day wrighting lol. sorry its not a good start to a romance but tell me if I misspelled anything.
Ooo interesting 
it's a good start! 
Also, a few misspelled words: aception=exception, prinsess=princess, compleat=complete, arogant=arrogant, serprised=surprised, councle=council, witch=which, imedeate=immediate 
And now I will finally share the beginnings of my story 
it was written out a lot better in my head 
Ok so copy-paste is not working rn (
) so I will just take screenshots 
I could go into a lot more detail about the kid and his abilities, but I'm all out of brain juice for now 
Still trying to sort out where the story goes from here 
Also a little art of the kid 
WOAH!!! INKHEART GIVE A LITTLE WARNING WHEN YOU SHOW OFF SUCH MASTERPIECES!! 
( a little off topic but how'd you get such a cool font? 
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(I have a Samsung tablet and you can change the default font to that one 
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yaay!!! I think I got I now, thank you!!!
(it's so cute!!!!) Anyway to get back on topic, I agree with ポールおじちゃん, your writing is very good!!! I really makes me question what the woman will do to break free from her family's curse!?
Love that first paragraph. It’s very solidly crafted. Also fun to see that you are still developing the “sympathy” talent.
Thank you! I really like how that part turned out too. And I owe a lot of the credit for this story to you guys for helping me brainstorm 
(it's so cute!!!!) Anyway to get back on topic, I agree with ポールおじちゃん, your writing is very good!!! I really makes me question what the woman will do to break free from her family's curse!?
(It is super cute 
) Well, she died, so I think we know the answer to that mystery In a way, her husband killing her was the consequence of defying the god's curse 
Oh my goodness 😍 that
Love that first paragraph. It’s very solidly crafted. Also fun to see that you are still developing the “sympathy” talent.
(it's so cute!!!!) Anyway to get back on topic, I agree with ポールおじちゃん, your writing is very good!!! I really makes me question what the woman will do to break free from her family's curse!?
) Well, she died, so I think we know the answer to that mystery In a way, her husband killing her was the consequence of defying the god's curse
That sounds logical.
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